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04/22/14 , , , , , , , , ,

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here’s a cool take on blackout poetry that blends prose, poetry, and drawing (via nprbooks).  how do you read the resulting poem?

a.) “we learn

as a child

to feel the wind

and exist in consciousness,

lost moments,

our remembering”

or

b.) “we learn

as a child

to feel the wind

and exist in consciousness

remembering our lost moments”

or

c.) something else…

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OH! That’s a LOVELY variation on the style! So nice!

Shawn L. Bird

04/23/14

Reblogged this on Shawn L. Bird and commented:
I love the want this black out poem is formatted, so I’m reblogging so I can find it later! So nice!

Shawn L. Bird

04/23/14

Great post….

komarovstyle

04/23/14

brilliant

kiwiskan

04/23/14

I like it i like it!!!

aishpandey

04/23/14

the wind as a child
learns to feel our existence,
our consciousness,
our remembering,
our lost moments.

aishpandey

04/23/14

didn’t think of that one. nice 🙂

note

04/23/14

thanks 🙂

aishpandey

04/23/14

This is fascinating!

heavenhappens

04/23/14

wow this is magnificent

blaqkcatjack

04/23/14

Reblogged this on blaqkcatjack.

blaqkcatjack

04/23/14

love the idea!

Leroy

04/23/14

Fascinating! b) is the logical choice of how it should work, if you go with the flow.

colonialist

04/23/14

yup i’m leaning toward b also

note

04/23/14

I love this! Very creative! I shall have to try it!

Leonas Lines

04/23/14

how incredibly unique – i love this!

words4jp

04/23/14

What a great idea 🙂

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