atolemdro

atolemdro

100% life from concentrate

You can scroll the shelf using and keys

“This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals—sounds that say listen to this, it is important.”

– timeless advice from the late gary provost.  he shows how variety is not only the spice of writing, but the spice of communication.  throughout the day, look out for the rhythm in people’s speech/writing.  note who’s conducting orchestras with their words and whose notes are falling flat.  via nikyatu.

Advertisements

a perfect example of rhythm in writing

09/12/13 , , , , , , , , ,

What do you think?

Please keep your comments polite and on-topic.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

comments

So true. Some sentences are so long, you literally have to stop…and catch your breath. Thanks for the reminder.

Maureen

09/12/13

I know some one who would say, ” tell this to my mother, Please!!!

Beulah

01/29/14

1 notes

  1. life rewind 2013: must-reads | atolemdro reblogged this and added:

    […] a perfect example of rhythm in writing […]

%d bloggers like this: